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Tags: Accidental vore angry pred Angry prey Belch Belly belly squish Big Belly Burp Cinder Fall concealing belly emerald sustrai Endosoma F/F Female Pred Female Prey huge burp Human Human Pred Loud Belch loud burp lugging belly around Non-fatal Oral Vore RP Log Ruby Rose RWBY Soft Vore Stuffing Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey unwilling to willing pred Unwilling to Willing prey Willing Pred Willing prey
What first started as a heroic redhead fighting criminals and putting them to justice has turned into an unfortunate predicament for her and a certain thief as they're forced to know each other while the redhead tries to get out~
This is another RP between me and MrMetroid that we started more than a year ago. I tried to fix all the grammar stuff I could find but if I missed a lot, let me know and I'll give this a thorough look later ^^;
Have fun reading! This is another long RP so take your time reading it lol
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Posted by TryMeIke 3 months ago Report
love it. btw, do you do belly pet stuff? would love to read permanent entrapment you've done too.
Posted by Elliot 3 months ago Report
This is really good and can you do another one like this but with Weiss
Posted by TheCyberEmpire 3 months ago Report
If I ever figure out how to put money on my online thingy, I would pay someone to do a audio on this story, the entire thing! :D The belches, the detail and of course, my other favorite waifus being Emerald makes this story even better! <D
And if I were to commission someone to do an audio story/RP, it has to be Ssublissive. UwU Their vore audios mixed in with story is just perfect. Especially the vore audio on The Interview! >w<
Posted by Apostolos 3 months ago Report
Well that was a read and a half, but quite entertaining. Are there other rp logs with similar setups? RWBY, endo (temporary or permanent), f/f?
Posted by Eldritch1 3 months ago Report
One of my favorites on the site! If there’s ever a continuation, I’ll be the first to read it!
Posted by Goldendevil21 3 months ago Report
This was a fantastic story. Sorry for not doing a detailed breakdown of each chapter but know that I respect the amount of effort you and Mr. Metroid did to make this story.
Great grammar in this ‘A Thief’s Hopeful Meal.’ I did not spot any misspelled words. Understood what was happening in the scene. Which is not to be underestimated in a vore story. And the words flowed well from paragraph to paragraph.
Liked the start where when Emerald ate the Huntress, she was not in the right mind. The explosion just tossing everyone in random directions that no one could control what happened. And how that led her to take her first swallow of the Rose. More an instinct than her intention.
Also great job conveying just how hard it is to move while carrying a human inside you. Ruby is light but is still a full person. And was great to see Emerald struggle with getting her ‘hopeful meal’ to keep quiet and cooperative.
The cookies at the resteraunt and seeing Emerald get embarrassed with her burping was also great.
And even liked how Emerald’s belly served as her emotional anchor to Ruby. How Emerald can control what she says but her belly responds immediately to her feelings. How it clenches around Ruby sometimes ruffly. Other times gently. And how I always believed it, despite how ridiculous the situation is.
Also liked the teamwork between Ruby and Emerald with Ruby having Emerald coughing up a crystal to serve as an explosion to get away. A nice pay-off from the start of the story where that was the same event that led to Ruby being eaten. What a great sense of consistency.
The little touch of when Emerald burped up some Rose petals was my favorite little detail.
Posted by rotta287 2 months ago Report
Holy shit, 127 pages of improvised plans, F/F, Endo, and lots of mixed conflicted feels. An all time GOAT, holy shit glad I took the time to read this.